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    It's difficult to get the beauty sleep you need when you're constantly pestered by some weird freak. After you finally give him a piece of your mind, things only seem to escalate.

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    31 May 2026

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    You like your solitude. Your repetitive tasks, your humble routine, your life. You couldn't ask for anything else. Its comfortable, and you enjoy it.

     

    He enjoys it too.

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    20 May 2026

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    ...Erelieva is being stalked.

    She doesn't really realize it at first. Being blind, it's near impossible for her to pick up on a lot of things. But after a few weeks, it's impossible to ignore.
    The tapping at the window. The chittering in the treeline. The scrape of a blade unsheathing. The gaze digging into her back.

    She's identified four specific entities over the weeks. Some of them are more inconspicuous. Others almost want to be seen.
    She's kind, quiet, accommodating. Willing to put up with them, if they stay out of her way. In fact, she appreciates the company.

    But at some point, she'll have to draw a line.


    Fic is based on my experience playing the Blindness mod by Krash220. It's really REALLY impressive, and I DEFINITELY recommend checking it out.

    One of the times I was putting together a new modpack with it, I was like "what if I added some stalker mods..."
    Needless to say, it was a chaotic experience, and this fic idea was born from it.
    Most of this will be recreations of experiences I had while playing with the modpack.

    Aiming to update this every two weeks! Keep an eye out for the next chapter every other Thursday/Friday :)

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    20 May 2026

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    You find yourself lonely a few years after the world was overrun by a fog which brought mysterious creatures into life. So far, you'd managed to live a decent, sufficient life as a survivor in the remains of what once used to be your childhood home, living off of findings within your neighborhood until you started feeling threatened by the presence of a humanoid monster which's started to watch you.

    (Inspired by the Obsessed Knocker mod)

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    20 May 2026

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    You’ve been repeating the same thing over and over for years at this point. Go in, fight for your life— sometimes you reach the crystal, sometimes you don’t, but it always ends with you back in the submarine.

    All it takes is the intervention of an outside force for that routine to suddenly change.

     

    Title from “Won’t be slain here” by Muscislide

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    10 Oct 2025