Absolutely marvelous story! I loved every bit of it. I really enjoyed how you changed so much from the MCU "cannon" to make things better. It was marvelous to see an adventure with a teen aged Loki and Thor, seeing Thor learn to value his brother, and learning that Sif and his "friends" were not real friends after all. Leaning to defend his brother. While Thor might still not have been ready to be king yet, it seems to me that that would have served to make him a better man. (unlike the ass he was in MCU). It was wonderful to see Odin and Frigga as both loving parents, that Frigga lived, and that Odin, while a bit of an ass, was not a bad guy. I really enjoyed the monster and the story of the curse. I LOVED that Caldor devoured Thanos!! and that served to prevent the Infinity saga and the events of Endgame---thereby making everyone's lives far better. It was a wonderful happy ending, seeing Loki safe and happy---and dragging Thor into a bookstore! (I can easily see a friendship developing between Tony and Loki!) A marvelous story with a great happy ending.
Thank you. It was fun writing the boys as teenagers. Incorporating the Supernatural elements was fun too and I couldn't resist having Loki drag Thor to a bookstore. I can picture Thor complaining the entire time yet glad to be there because he's with his brother.
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