Wow. This was just... wow. I think I'll have to read this a few more times before I can make any better sense because your writing sucked me right into John's spinning, disconnected POV -- & then he & Rodney were making out which was so hot, but also discombobulating. Whew! What a scary-crazy ride, & what a wonderful place it lead to.... <3 <3
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