This was amazing! Thank you so much for writing such a beautiful fill for my prompt: your grasp of Vanessa's character is amazing, and your prose is so lovely, full of subtleties and gorgeous imagery, I just want to roll around in it.
Hell’s Kitchen floats along as ever, always on the verge of foundering, buoyed by its guardian vigilante. Her people are already in the city, already sinking their hooks deep into its rancid corners. There is infection here, running deep, and she is going to burn it out.
YES PERFECT. I love how you've written her as someone just as ruthless and idealistic as Fisk, but I can definitely see her being far more suited to manipulating people than Fisk ever was. And to your above comment, 'ruling the world and crushing her enemies like a bamf' OMG YES :D (and on the way she can play with Matt a little for her amusement :D)
Ahh, thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it, because your prompt was incredible. I think Vanessa is definitely more suited to manipulation than Fisk is; he's a little more blunt, a little more 'force of nature that you either go with or get flattened by' whereas Vanessa's touch would be more delicate. Which is probably why they're such a kick ass power couple, haha. And yes! Ruling the world, crushing enemies, and toying with Matt who has NO IDEA what he's gotten into with her. I mean, he thought Fisk was bad? He was nothing compared to her. Matt would be a mouse running in circles to Vanessa's cat sharpening her claws and purring in satisfaction because she knows there's no way for him to escape.
Basically I want a thousand more people to fill your prompt so we have more of Vanessa being a badass and doing this beautiful, deadly dance with Matt as she leads him to the slaughter. :D
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