Comment on A BIT OF SPARRING ON A SUNNY DAY

1. VanishedElf Fri 06 Mar 2015 06:02PM UTC

   

   So good!
   Lovely writing, I love the way you explore the characters' thoughts, bringing their tangents back to the story with such cleverness. Well done!

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2. 1. rubyelf Fri 06 Mar 2015 06:25PM UTC

      

      Thank you! I appreciate you taking the time to comment and I'm very glad people are still reading in this fandom!

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