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Alone Again: Rewritten.

Summary:

Alone Again follows Min-ji Noe, a 19-year-old girl living in a small city. She ends up in a mysterious house full of people she's never met before and is faced with a killing game.

Notes:

Alone Again is my old Roblox Flicker AU fic that I started on Wattpad in 2022. After finishing the trilogy in late 2024, I came up with the idea of making AA into a visual novel-style YouTube series and began writing this script/rewrite in 2025. However, due to my incoming A-Level Exams, I have decided that I am just going to keep writing this but abandon all plans to make it into a series. I will still hopefully rewrite the whole trilogy but, knowing how slow I write, this will take a while.

Bold text is what I used when writing to signify what would have become a CG. It is basically any kind of scene change or significant moment such as character introduction or interaction. Italic text is a person's thoughts.

 This may be really bad, I can't tell. But I wrote it mainly with myself in mind and didn't think much about an audience, but since I cancelled the idea of the series, I thought I'd share it as I love writing but haven't published anything all year.

Chapter 1: Alone.

Notes:

Don't be afraid to comment! When I posted the old version on Wattpad, I recieved a LOT of comments, but none on AO3, and I was wondering to myself why not many people comment on AO3 fics...

I LOVE recieving comments, including (CONSTRUCTIVE) criticism! So go crazy

Chapter Text

A girl lying in bed.

Bzzzt.. Bzzzzzzzzzt…

She opens her eyes.

???: The light flickers on in my bedroom.
What the…?

Why are my lights on at this hour? I didn’t turn them on. As far as I know, you can’t set them on a timer, right?
Stupid electricity…

She gets out of bed and looks outside. It’s night.

???: It is still dark. It must be morning.
I guess I will go eat breakfast…
My phone says it’s 4:30 AM.
I’m never usually up this early… but it won’t do me any harm. I could go on a walk.

The girl brushes her teeth, her hair, and gets dressed.

She goes to her kitchen.

???: It’ll be good to stretch my legs a little. An early morning walk won’t kill me.

In her kitchen, she pulls up a bowl and a box of cereal. ‘Milk flakes’.

???: My favourite…

As she reaches towards her fridge, she finds a picture stuck on it with a magnet.

The picture has three girls on. All have pale skin and black hair, but different eye colours.

???: Gosh… I miss them.
Back in high school, we were inseparable. The best trio of all time. Everyone knew those two, and I was their best friend. The quiet life was nice, if not a little… quiet.
They helped me settle in when we moved here in high school.
They even supported me when I got my first boyfriend, even if he was an asshole.
The best trio ever. The only friends I could ever ask for. Now look at us.
At least I still have her…

She takes the milk out her fridge and pours the milk into her bowl.

???: Disgusting bowl of garbage. I’d be better off eating nothing. But I don’t want to wither away, so I guess I’m eating it.

My apartment looks awful. I haven’t had enough motivation to clean it in ages.
That’s why we only ever meet at her apartment.
We really need to move in together…

Alright. I’m finally done eating this… slop. I guess I can go for a walk now.
My phone buzzes. One new message.

She checks her phone.

???: ‘Hey babe. Miss you so much. Call me soon, kay?’
Is that a drunk text…?
Leave me alone.

She puts her phone back in her pocket.

???: I’ll stop delaying it now. I need to get some exercise in eventually. It’s been weeks.
The streets will be quiet too, which I like.
I used to be so opposed to being invisible. Now I don’t even notice.
Still, I try to dress nicely. What if, by chance, someone does notice me?
If they recognise me from school?
I’m counting on that small possibility. Otherwise I might just rot in my room all year.

She goes outside.

???: The air is cold and crisp as it hits my face. I’ve missed this, as much as I can hate it.
There’s a slight breeze.
My feet meet the path, already worn from walking down the endless flights of stairs I had to use to get here, and I begin to walk.
I have my phone in a bag on my shoulder, listening to some music through my headphones.
I’d like to buy wireless ones, but I can’t just yet. They’re too expensive for now.

She stops at a path near an abandoned building. It’s lit by one streetlight

???: This is where it happened.
The moment my life went wrong, where she… she died.
For anyone walking past, it just looks like a normal streetlight…
Fuck, I don’t wanna be here. Why did I walk this way? I didn’t even mean to.
And over there is the local ‘haunted’ house.
Bullshit, it’s haunted. I don’t believe in ghosts or any of that paranormal shit.
Wow, I had never noticed just how bad it looks…
It’s a bungalow, so it’s bound to look a little… messy. Every bungalow you find is over a hundred years old.
The paint’s peeling, and there’s a weird smell.
Something… metallic.
What… is that?
Wait, is that… blood?

BANG!